Feedback on 'Rough cut'

Editing: Some shots need to be cut down because they are too long.

Sound: Good use of diagetic sound but needs more non-diagetic sound.

Mise en scene: Good location, props and costume.

Narrative: Needs some transitions to break up the shots.

Reply to feedback: We will cut down the shots to make them shorter, we just haven't had enough time to cut hem down. The sound track is being finished and should be put in next lesson. We haven't decided where we will use the transitions but we will put them in as soon as we have decided where they will be most effective.